The Nanny

The Nanny

9.9K Reads 258 Votes 4 Part Story
Jordan By StupidAndFearless Updated Nov 09, 2011

Kacey Row has just graduated highschool and is off to be a nanny for the Reily family. She isnt expecting anything to happen, just babysitting some kids for the entrie summer. But what happens when the house is full of four teenage boys and three little ones? While she's home alone with them all day? Every day? A little bit of everything happens to this teenage nanny.

Tardis_Lady Tardis_Lady Feb 13, 2012
um....I LOVE IT! but it needs more details and how the character is feeling.
StupidAndFearless StupidAndFearless Oct 27, 2011
@BoisterousGirl Thanks. I know. Grammar and I are emenies. :)
StupidAndFearless StupidAndFearless Sep 07, 2011
@CallmeCrazycauseIknw thanks. I no i deffinitaly gotta work on it
StupidAndFearless StupidAndFearless Sep 07, 2011
@CallmeCrazycauseIknw describing things is my weak point in writing. im not very good at it. :/
MsArtemis MsArtemis Sep 07, 2011
All I would say is this needs more description. There is plenty of diaglogue, which is good, but there is little description. This makes it very hard to visualize for readers. With a few more adjectives, I'm sure it'd be great!