16 spells

16 spells

90.2K Reads 2.9K Votes 28 Part Story
Babygirl Luz By ParisColeman Completed

Unknown of her powerful gift, Jen who just turned 16, is brought in a type of world she hasn't known existed for centuries. She learns that due to her age she only has 16 spells that she can use, and due to the type of magic that runs in her family, her magic holds up every other 16 year olds magic together. When Jen finds her grandmother's old spell locket, she mixes two spells together and unlocks some of her new powers. Now, her magic is unbalanced and out of control, throwing other's magic out of control. Now, she has to figure out how to get things back to the way they was, before she opens a magic portal to the land of forbidden.

  • 16
  • forbidden
  • jen
  • magic
  • spells
Dani_is_a_Queen Dani_is_a_Queen Aug 02, 2016
Your grammar is a huge turnoff. I really like this story, but the grammar and spelling, and the fact that you don't use quotation marks kinda bugs me >.<
tobeaheartbreaker tobeaheartbreaker Dec 17, 2016
stopped reading just because of the little amount of quotation marks--fix it for more readers
ParisColeman ParisColeman May 15, 2016
Guys please yes i know major editing. I am trying to get this book finished so i can go back and edit it
Freshblue101 Freshblue101 Jun 30, 2016
Like the story. Why not put some quotations letting us readers when someone is talking and who. And when they are not
GirlWithATypewritter GirlWithATypewritter Feb 10, 2017
This new years my mom got married again and they only went out for 4 months..
IISOMEONEONEII IISOMEONEONEII Feb 06, 2016
Hey Just saying you should edit this story the plot is good but um the hrammar and the punctuation marks no good sorry I ca't read stuff like this  deleting it  immediatly (errors made on purpose to emphasize my point and to demonstrate how annoying it is )