I Love You Mr. McCarthy

14 Part Story 14.6K Reads 348 Votes
Purple By ThePurple15 Updated 3 years ago
Violet was perfect. she had the perfect family, the perfect boyfriend, the perfect best friend, and the perfect spot on the cheer leading team. then her mom leaves and her perfect life goes up in smokes.
    
    Two years later, not only has her style changed, but so has her life. the only thing keeping her from ending it is her best friend Haley.
    
    Then she meets Elliott and it is love at first sight...too bad its her new art teacher.
You were switching tenses in the beginning. From first person to third. I like how he had them do that thing w/ the hat and their assignment, I like that idea a lot. Hmm, I'm a bit iffy about his age and the whole mentioning their middle name thing. I like her description, pink hair? Love it
You were switching tenses in the beginning. From first person to third. I like how he had them do that thing w/ the hat and their assignment, I like that idea a lot. Hmm, I'm a bit iffy about his age and the whole mentioning their middle name thing. I like her description, pink hair? Love it
You were switching tenses in the beginning. From first person to third. I like how he had them do that thing w/ the hat and their assignment, I like that idea a lot. Hmm, I'm a bit iffy about his age and the whole mentioning their middle name thing. I like her description, pink hair? Love it
You were switching tenses in the beginning. From first person to third. I like how he had them do that thing w/ the hat and their assignment, I like that idea a lot. Hmm, I'm a bit iffy about his age and the whole mentioning their middle name thing. I like her description, pink hair? Love it
You were switching tenses in the beginning. From first person to third. I like how he had them do that thing w/ the hat and their assignment, I like that idea a lot. Hmm, I'm a bit iffy about his age and the whole mentioning their middle name thing. I like her description, pink hair? Love it
You were switching tenses in the beginning. From first person to third. I like how he had them do that thing w/ the hat and their assignment, I like that idea a lot. Hmm, I'm a bit iffy about his age and the whole mentioning their middle name thing. I like her description, pink hair? Love it