Sometimes things aren't what they seem to be at the beginning. Sometimes you have to go through the storm to make it to the sunshine.
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He wouldn't be breathing after talking all that... I'm on the plus side and what he does is disrespectful
Sweetie don't be mindless. There is a fine line between love and being taken for granted.
It needs a little editing, but it seems like a good read. Keep writing!
Jacoby need to stop calling her fat she need like really leave him good cause gonna to try beat on her and abused her so. Or later so she have chance leave him why she can tho
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I bet you when he got home I be waiting on him with a gun. Betcha he won't say nothing then🔫