Another Man's Treasure|Editing|ONHOLD|

Another Man's Treasure|Editing|ONHOLD|

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Gifted_Mind_ By Loveee4Lyfe Updated Oct 04

Sometimes things aren't what they seem to be at the beginning. Sometimes you have to go through the storm to make it to the sunshine. 

•Read to find out what happens

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zShSh9 zShSh9 Sep 30
He wouldn't be breathing after talking all that... I'm on the plus side and what he does is disrespectful
Sweetie don't be mindless. There is a fine line between love and being taken for granted.
It needs a little editing, but it seems like a good read. Keep writing!
Jacoby need to stop calling her fat she need like really leave him good cause gonna to try beat on her and abused her so. Or later so she have chance leave him why she can tho
Loveee4Lyfe Loveee4Lyfe Jan 13
Aww thanks feedback is important to me so feel free to comment
tatyanacoleman17 tatyanacoleman17 Dec 27, 2015
I bet you when he got home I be waiting on him with a gun. Betcha he won't say nothing then🔫