So lots of people say the love of your life is hard to find
my story isn't quite like that... In fact the love of my life came right to my doorstep
and got down on one knee
held a ring
And proposed to my mother
(Cover made by @secretbatman29)
Why is this book reminding me of the song Stacey's mum 😂😂😂😂😂
Lots of "smile" in there. Try using other words like smirk, grin or even sneer. Also you could say "he asked while widening his beam" or something like that idk rlly I'm horrible at writing.
THIS IS REAL
THIS IS ME
IM EXACTLY WHERE IM SUPPOSED TO BE NOW
It's a broken home (sorry, but honestly, I'm also 12 and my dads balling with liver and kidney failure )
Without sounding annoying (and you did say we could correct you) it is often not always wife/husband love but also wife/wife, husband/husband, or couples that don't identify as specific gender roles. Maybe you should change it so you don't offend anyone.
I was gonna point out its also illegal but then I remembered you already put it at the start