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The Troubles

The Troubles

882 Reads 53 Votes 13 Part Story
sunnyshadow By sunnyshadow Updated Dec 26, 2011

Zara is any ordinary beautiful girl at school but after a disatrous party, she can't make her own decision. With two boys falling in love with her, one nice, one evil, she can't decided which one is right for her. At her hardworking trip at a resort, she'll just have to see where her heart guides her but something unexpected comes out of nowhere. She'll have to keep secrets and quiet and do as told.

sunnyshadow sunnyshadow Sep 12, 2011
@WelshDragon6 haha i'll read over and look for the errors. thanks for commenting and the next chap. will be out by tomorrow
welshdragon welshdragon Sep 12, 2011
this is really good! a couple of grammar errors but im such a nerd that's the only reason why i notice them :P apart from that, really good! you need to write another chapter! :D xx
IMAFISH11 IMAFISH11 Sep 11, 2011
OMG i didn't know you had this in you, Sunnyshadow :P gooooooood story keep writing!!!!!! I updated "The Player Princess" so to whoever's reading please check it out!
sunnyshadow sunnyshadow Sep 04, 2011
thanks so much. k that's a good idea thanks. what do you think i should do with the story?
sunnyshadow sunnyshadow Sep 03, 2011
Who ever reads this please give me feedback to improve the story. hope you enjoy it :)