It's me first Vincent X Scott Scottcent or purple phone whatever ye mateys wanna call it I've been trying me best to fight me urges of making this ye'll see why later so as aways keep yer smiles mateys *smiles and waves*
Don't worry Vince I'm sure Raine will change that, I'm not gonna use my pirate accent yet
Omg you r like the best keep up the good work and more ides pls
Vincent is so sweet in this book! When he started Crying I felt myself going "Awww don't cry"
You know what the number 87 reminds me of...? *gets foxy* THE BITE OF '87!!
Maybe remove the author's notes and replace them with footnotes?
It wouldn't interrupt the narrative as much.
Also, why did Scott take Vincent home? Was he forced to?
iS THIS A DYSTOPIAN THING
It's certainly interesting.
You could work on the grammar, it was a little hard to read. :p
I liked it. :3