Adventures Of Young Percy Jackson

Adventures Of Young Percy Jackson

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I wanna be a bean By jjjmsl Updated Apr 04

Merp, no description. Gotta read it.
WARNING: OP and OOC Percy, deal with it

I'm a little confused...so Percy fought the giant war when he was 8? And Leo was 16?
I get its supposed to be ooc, but this is sort of too far. Just a hint for writing though: break up the paragraphs more. A new paragraph should start when a new character is speaking
Cooljoanna16 Cooljoanna16 Dec 06, 2015
Sooo cute. Also if Percy is young then can annabeth not use to date him. I'm a peracbeth fan and all but at a young age it just sounds weird
SamanthaPerry0 SamanthaPerry0 Dec 05, 2015
Also you might want to say somewhere in the title or the description that this is a Percy Jackson and Avenger Crossover and maybe, at least try, to make a description so people know what they might be reading.
SamanthaPerry0 SamanthaPerry0 Dec 05, 2015
This is also weird cause later you say he's 8 but here you say he's 12
SamanthaPerry0 SamanthaPerry0 Dec 05, 2015
If Percy was 12 he'd only have to spend 6 year in foster care or a juvenile delinquent facility