Deep Blue - The Descent

Deep Blue - The Descent

1K Reads 30 Votes 36 Part Story
ToddWorld By ToddCowden Updated Dec 29, 2018

More people have visited the moon, than have found their way to the bottom of the ocean. Test piloting the military's latest top secret assault submarine, in the most inhospitable environment on the planet, a reckless test pilot teams up with a reclusive scientist. What they discover below will change everything above.
    
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  • action
  • adventure
  • alien
  • future
  • marine
  • romance
  • sci-fi
  • underwater
Chris_Dixon Chris_Dixon Jun 29, 2016
This keeps getting more and more interesting! It's actually gave me an idea for a story different than this, but still about going deeper and deeper into the Earth!
                              
                              Bloody good job!
KelKaiser KelKaiser Jan 03
I would suggest putting the commas on the inside of the quote, where the period is at. That's the standard practice.
KelKaiser KelKaiser Jan 03
This might sound better and be clearer if you just put 'sarcastically.' But, ya know, that's just my opinion.
Interesting. A race of beings already living at the bottom of the sea. I wonder what they look like.