If I Fell (On Hold)

If I Fell (On Hold)

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Elena By Fab4Freak Updated Jan 28, 2011

Fourteen-year-old Julia's life couldn't be any better. She had great friends, family, and was starting off her freshman year. Plus, she was beginning to think that her summer crush would turn into something more. But when the new boy moves in right next door, will her life ever be the same again?

CanWePretend CanWePretend Dec 02, 2010
AHHHH! THIS IS AMAZING!! Sorry it took ages for me to read!!! I havent been on in AGES!! anyways- awesome!
Seibie Seibie Nov 13, 2010
Hello there! It's cute how you put in the Beatles! Quite rare indeed, hehe. And I agree with brightstar94, couldn't have said it better myself! Otherwise, lovely!
Joyce247 Joyce247 Nov 11, 2010
This is really amazing!! Truly great! Upload more and more and more and voted! XD
Fab4Freak Fab4Freak Nov 07, 2010
@brightstar94 thank you, that helped so much! Thank you thank you thank you!
Fab4Freak Fab4Freak Nov 07, 2010
@NowIsNotForever @Catluver2121 @xherestousx thanks to all, really appreciate it:)
Katluver2121 Katluver2121 Nov 07, 2010
 This is really good i would love it if u would continue!!!! my story is also set in camp so maybe u could check it out, i also need someone to critique my work!