A Submissive To A Woman

A Submissive To A Woman

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Destiny Winters By beautyneverfades Updated Nov 08

What happens when Anastasia meets a shy and innocent girl by the name of mayleen, who is not only beautiful but seems to catch anastasias attention. 

What happens when mayleen accept a date from the intimidating woman?

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zarrianyrie zarrianyrie Sep 28
Ewwww you just lost me there my sister second grade teacher name was Ms grey and she ugly and mean hell nawww
Why is "CVS" in quotes?
                              
                              Also, I've noticed that you have a lot of run-on sentences so far. Try periods instead of commas.
The dialogue has an exclamation point, yet the speech tag indicates a soft voice?
                              
                              Also, nearly this entire paragraph is a run-on sentence. Try periods.
Is the two periods after the word "medication" intentional? 
                              
                              Also, you're missing a period after the word "t-shirt."
                              
                              Also also, there should probably be a comma after the word "life" because it is followed by the word "so."
soul-cold-blooded soul-cold-blooded Jul 13, 2016
-^- heheehe *dirty mind consumes me cuz fergie is playing* °^°
I'm so 5h af... I read 'gorgeous green eyes' and my brain automatically thinks  "LAUREN JAUREGUI" 
                              
                              
                              And yes in all caps...