Immortal at Seventeen |SLOW UPDATES|

Immortal at Seventeen |SLOW UPDATES|

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Aarya By princessAarya Updated Nov 26

Alexandra Ravens, the only daughter of a multimillionaire, stood before the elaborate cake that had been arranged for her seventeenth birthday. She smiled and politely shook the hands of the guests. Suddenly she was seized by an inexplicable pain contorting her smile to a frown and then a grimace and then she collapsed.....
      When she came to she stood in front of imposing wrought iron gates that read 'Gate Seventeen'.....
    What lies beyond those gates? Alex is in for a surprise....

nezzaahat nezzaahat Dec 20, 2015
I can even read this book coz of the title it is so attractive!
yagappar yagappar Dec 18, 2015
I think you have to leave some space between the paragraphs sis
callista_z callista_z Dec 16, 2015
Karen seems to have some control over Alex even as a maid. She isnt careful of what she says to her. And btw, awesome chapter! And very unique
bloom1877 bloom1877 Dec 13, 2015
The story is very good but i will suggest you to make paras then it will become more good and it would be easier to read, so pls make paras
Lonesome_Penguin Lonesome_Penguin Nov 23, 2015
Very good chapter but I'm kinda confused with what's happening with her :) but still pretty good with the detail and figurative language. Tbh, this book deserves more credit