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Bethany By katiebeth_love Updated May 28, 2012

you want to read this. really, you do. and you should.

katiebeth_love katiebeth_love May 27, 2012
@wheres-gezza thanks for the feedback! I think my actual plan is to re-upload the beginning, because the story plan has changed... thank you!
katiebeth_love katiebeth_love Feb 13, 2011
@KnockEmDeadBabe Thank you! Thanks for commenting and everything, I really appreciate it! :)
KnockEmDeadBabe KnockEmDeadBabe Feb 12, 2011
I Loved the beginning 
                              you introduced the characters well :)
                              You have a new fan now!
                              and i am reading on!
Purerose Purerose Jan 24, 2011
This is a good start. I agree with what a couple of commenters have mentioned about showing not telling, I prefer finding about about characters in this way, rather than just being told what people are doing and why. :)
katiebeth_love katiebeth_love Jan 22, 2011
@steph612 Thanks so much! I know, I almost feel like I should change the alarm clock part, but I feel like I wrote it that way so I'll just keep it. But I definitely won't start a story that way again. :P
                              Thanks for reading! & I plan on reading the rest of your story when I get time also. :D
xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Dec 29, 2010
:0 so dows she get a bf or what???!?!?! IEEEEEE Mooooore preaaaase!!!!