Running From Them, Running To You

Running From Them, Running To You

8K Reads 187 Votes 10 Part Story
Unknown2me By Unknown2me Updated Apr 24, 2011

At 16, Amber Jameson takes off, leaving her family and friends with only guesses to why she left.  When found by the authorities, she gives a new name, Auden James, and is sent to a foster home.  There she meets her roommate, Courtney, and sweet, kind Honor. But it is Will, Honor's boyfriend, who Auden finds most interesting.  Auden begins to see that she is not the only one with a bad past, but can she get close enough to those she loves without revealing her own secrets?

MissNemi MissNemi Jun 23, 2011
I love this, miss Unknown2me (cool name btw). Your writing is amazing, especially your descriptions for atmosphere. Very intense near the end of this chapter!! Voted! 
twelve29 twelve29 Apr 21, 2011
This is really great. And interesting too. The end of this chapter was fantastic, kinda like a cliffhanger, but not really. =)) Keep writing! ;) Voted.
LittleAmy LittleAmy Apr 18, 2011
I liked it. Really good descriptions, of the characters and the house. You use good vocabulary, which is nice to see. I'm definately reading more. Voted!
CraziiZaii CraziiZaii Feb 23, 2011
I relli lykd this storii... i thought it was emotional and sentimental which i luvd ;p Keep it up ;p 
xXxTwilightLuverxXx xXxTwilightLuverxXx Feb 20, 2011
Hi. =] 
                              You asked me for a review, so here it is.
                              
                                 I like your story. It's good. The plotline seems intresting. But you have some grammer mistakes that I noticed. Nothing big, just one or two wrong suffixes {I hope that makes sense}. Other than that, there's nothing wrong with this story. =]
Unknown2me Unknown2me Feb 10, 2011
@KyleAnderson I would actually like you to edit once I revive my personal computer, but I've got absolutely no idea when that will be . . . but you'll hear from me eventually!