My beautiful abused mate

My beautiful abused mate

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Natcord000 By natcord123 Updated Jul 17

Natalia Rosa is an abused 18 year old mute her mom passed when she was born and ever since her father blamed her and became a drunk.

Alex Black is 20 and is the deadliest alpha out there he's the leader of the silver moon pack and is looking for his mate. Will he find her? 


This book will be filled with errors and bad punctuation, since I am writing this on my phone they won't be long chapters either. I will go back and fix all errors later! Please enjoy the book! 









Read and find out!!!







THIS IS MY FIRST BOOK PLEASE DON'T JUDGE IF THERE IS ANY ERRORS!!!

Xapri714 Xapri714 2 days ago
When I read that I felt as if the teacher yelled that at her idk y
Shifter101 Shifter101 Feb 10
Ah, when you go through and edit for grammar problems, I'll have commented more than likely to show you where they are and what they should look like. I'm one of those people who are best friends with their English teacher.
Shifter101 Shifter101 Feb 10
When you have two people communing, separate the speech into separate paragraphs to keep a minimum on confusion.
Chrissy782 Chrissy782 Sep 03, 2016
Why don't you put apostrophes when they talk for example Davis said "hello Leona"
Shifter101 Shifter101 Feb 10
Put a period, semicolon, or comma and after morning to join the two sentences. Capitalize   Blood Moon Pack to give them the proper title, showing that it is a name.
Shifter101 Shifter101 Feb 10
Put a period after groan to keep your sentence from being a run on.