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Crawling in the monsters skin

Crawling in the monsters skin

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readqueen9 By readqueen9 Updated Oct 16, 2010

Lana Night or know as Tattoo in the vampire world that she wish
she was never part of...
Tattoo is know as powerful vampire but doesn't know who made 
her a vampire and why and now someone is trying to kill...
when she meets James

come with her and find who her manster is and how is James.....

xLadyBirdx xLadyBirdx Dec 28, 2010
This is good so far, but you might want to go over it and edit it. Due to the minor mistakes you have. Such as instead of happen it should be happened and instead of but of curse it should be but of course. :)
                              Apart from that everything is good :)