Help me! I'm stuck in a house full of stupid vampires!

Help me! I'm stuck in a house full of stupid vampires!

33.5K Reads 463 Votes 13 Part Story
Beyza By purplelovercutiepie Updated Apr 05, 2011

Ashley's life is hard enough without having to be a blood suply. After being kidnapped at a Paramore concert, Ashley and her best friends strugle to stay alive. She and her friends soon learn that mother Earth holds many deadly secrets. Secrets that nobody, not even the powerful Vampire Society knows about... 

-Purplelovercutiepie

XxamoraXcarolinexX XxamoraXcarolinexX Sep 19, 2010
i think your awsome 
                              can you read my story is called 
                              i am death and death is me plz read
MistyKaren MistyKaren Sep 19, 2010
Being critical, I think this piece needs to have more detail and less caps. It's very quick and very short, but there's not that much interest in it. Also, avoid putting text chat/acronyms into the narration, even if the narrator -is- a teenage girl, alright? Good luck with your story : )
bookloverbeyza bookloverbeyza Aug 06, 2010
i liv the characters :) marina is in it? cool :PP i luv angelina yes i am very conceited....
TheGirlisBrightRed TheGirlisBrightRed Jul 18, 2010
BAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!  i love the part where she is like "If you guessed Forks you're a dumbass" LOLZ!!!!!!! 
love_creativity love_creativity Jul 10, 2010
please read my story it's "badly abused and now badly inlove" please tell me if i should continue or not tnx guyz
                              
incrediblechicken incrediblechicken Jul 10, 2010
wow!!! why didnt they yell or something!?!?!?  i would be freaking out...haha paramore!! wait im confused her hair is naturally black with purple highlights????