Omg this is sooo amazing! Its captured my attention right away...hands down the best prolouge I have read all week! Xoxo
Omg this is so interesting you captured my attention right away
Thankyou, and I'll be sure to go through it and fix those errors :)
I enjoy your writing style and flow. A couple of things I noticed:
'I never for a thought' should be 'I never for a second,'
'the only tears that i have to [deal] with...'
Where did you get the cover
Unicornsrule has the same one
just a heads up to everyone, if it says i have voted on my OWN story. Blame my stupidly crazy iphone that goes spastic occasionally. sorry that it makes me look up myself and all vain and stuff, xx