Yin & Yang

Yin & Yang

75.4K Reads 1.9K Votes 34 Part Story
ElectraM By ElectraM Completed

*Trailer on the side*

Annette and Adam have always been close; first as friends, then as lovers. But growing up means growing apart and they find themselves hanging on by a thread.

That thread is severely snapped by one mistake and by one phone call -ending both their lives as they knew them.

Annette is shipped off to live with her uncle without so much as a goodbye and Adam's life is left in shambles.

Fast forward two years and Annette waltzes into town with more baggage than she left with. And with the help of some new friends, some old ones, and a new attitude she begins to stir up trouble in their small town.

Annette only wants revenge for all the things Adam did to her and he only wants her. With these two motives, a game of seduction ensues.

But, with their feelings barely veiled and their secrets bursting at the seems, will there ever really be a winner?

jimrileyenlight jimrileyenlight Nov 24, 2014
Vivid and gripping. The only note that  puzzled me was that the icy water "scorched" her throat. Maybe it's just me. But words that make the reader pause and wonder are sometimes not the right words.
missyxmysterious missyxmysterious Jul 25, 2014
Seems like a great story and I like the cast! Let's see how this story will turn out!
the_bagger001 the_bagger001 Apr 20, 2014
whoa 1st chapter became my favorite....so her goes my precious vote to you dearest writer
                              
                              how does the title co-relate to the story??? Yim and Yang???:)
Fernandarevelo_ Fernandarevelo_ Jul 19, 2013
Wow, it started with a dream (: That's a first, very original :D
ElectraM ElectraM Jul 13, 2013
Thank you so much, I really appreciate the feedback. It's really helpful! I've been so busy I haven't had the time to edit or read over what I've written, but I'll get on it as soon as I have time! Thank you! c: @clovee
Nicole565 Nicole565 May 10, 2013
This is really good. Im surprised you dont have more comments telling you this! 
                              
                              4th paragraph, first sentence, im not sure if it's added words or missing letters, but something is wrong with it lol.