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Bedazzled [MXM]✓

Bedazzled [MXM]✓

78.2K Reads 5.3K Votes 20 Part Story
ѕαιɴт cαlιeɴdo By saintc Completed

Jeffery is sick, sea sick.

After a mysterious creature from the depths saved him from drowning, Jeffery just can't seem to keep his head out of the water. Bound in lust and put in a compromising situation, Jeffery makes an astonishing decision to go forth to find this merman.

Cover by @coolauthorchic

Not that I am an expert or anything, but isn't it "would have never"?
U won't believe how long I've been searching for a merman boyxboy story
Staysweet18 Staysweet18 Oct 02, 2016
                              I'm really intrigued to find out what happens to Jeff, and what the creature is. Overall it was a good prolouge, left me with a lot of questions I want answered, can't wait to read more.
jollyreaderjennell jollyreaderjennell Jul 27, 2016
                              I love your ending how you add in the bedazzled in it.. Your description was good. I'm very  curious as to what the creature is. I didn't notice any grammatical error which is good. I also like how you build suspense. The start was good too, waking up on a breach very usual.
- - Oct 14, 2016
L personally enjoyed the story as it is going so smooth...the questions that has arised by just reading the story makes readers stick to the book... waiting for beautiful mermaid...
MLReed55 MLReed55 Oct 14, 2016
                              Very intriguing chapter. I love how mysterious it is. No grammatical errors that I could see. Nice start