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After ultron

After ultron

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Gravityfaller904 By Gravityfaller904 Updated Jan 11

After ultron attacked, petiro is taken to the hospital to  get fixed. (Hawk silver fanfiction)

ElvenDiscoBall ElvenDiscoBall Nov 08, 2016
                              Sorryy its good storyline but there's many spelling mistakes
PannaMaria123 PannaMaria123 Aug 07, 2016
Uh i dont wanna be rude or somethin but its Pietro not petiro or lol haha sorry
SookeRivers SookeRivers Nov 08, 2015
Maybe use a more descriptive word such as "groaned" or "mumbled". Also earlier in the writing you switched from third person view to first person view and then back to third person. 😉🙃