Trust Me

Trust Me

1K Reads 11 Votes 13 Part Story
Jessica By vampirefreak Updated Jan 23, 2012

How far would you go for the one you love?  					

Amanda Murray will be known for the girl who has everything and anything, spoiled to the bone , the luckiest girl in the world. She doesn’t feel this way at all , her dad is now the new president of the United Sates and she doesn’t like it at all. Amanda’s younger  brother  Nick has a hockey hero who  is Sam Smith on the Washington Capitals. Sam comes in Nicks life and he loves it, Amanda cant stand Sam , but Sam ignores that fact and knows she needs him more than ever. When problems grow all of a sudden Nick goes missing , will they ever be able to find him ? Will they find the person that took him away? Is Amanda next?

BadmintonGurl BadmintonGurl Oct 16, 2010
You better continue this story....I wish I could vote 8 more times. COme on people!!!
vampirefreak vampirefreak Oct 16, 2010
@frakkevin Thanks for that ,m yeah after i read it i editied it , i hope it make more sense now.. :)
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 15, 2010
This could be good. I had to read it twice though...I got confused about who Sam was. At first I thought Nick was the hockey car. I say split that sentence to make things more clear
                              
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