A Painful Letter

A Painful Letter

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Rhonda By rhonda_lynn Completed

The first is a letter that Moriah (eclipse3318) wrote for someone. It was a very painful situation for her, and I thought it may have come out good in a poem. 
The second: the rewritten version... as a poem of course. I wrote this, but of course kept the best and most needed parts in. 

Thanks a ton for reading. :) 

cookieoflife cookieoflife Aug 02, 2011
I love it!
                              Its like when you love some one so much that their happiness is your happiness even when their going out with someone...
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mrjay2010 mrjay2010 Dec 24, 2010
this is really nice and sweet. only difference when covertin it to a poem, i lwd've tried to capture the essence and meaning of what she said, more, while using less-if any at all- of her actual statement nd original letter.
                              However, nonetheless, still beautifully written.