Teach me

Teach me

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Queenlexx By queennlexxx Updated Oct 05

Alexis is one of the youngest most talented singers in the industry . She's signed to young money cash money records & also happens to label mates with the famous heart stopping Jacquees. He's been trying for years to get her attention until one day she decides to talk to him . An unfortunate chain of events take place as time goes by with these two. Will they triumph or will they break. Read to find out.

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queennlexxx queennlexxx Oct 31, 2015
Yea I noticed that to, I think I did a little bit better with the dialogue in the last chapter than this one. Thanks for the feed back ,!  @ChocoDollx3
AuthenticSoul AuthenticSoul Oct 31, 2015
This is good but I do suggest that you make sure you list who's POV it's in and space out your dialogue against your thoughts so your readers know when that person is actually speaking or not