Playing with the Stars

Playing with the Stars

486 Reads 15 Votes 1 Part Story
єℓιѕα н. By _petrichor Updated Apr 24, 2013

You don't break unspeakable rules. They just aren't meant to be broken. 

"See, I did love a boy. I loved him so much it hurt. He could spend so much time fascinated on one person and love them with or without their mistakes. He would love them wholly as a person."

My breathing becomes irregular, but I can seem to get any words out of my mouth. I just lie there like a stupid person, waiting for her to speak again.

It took 6 years. 6 long years before she would come back to her hometown again. Mel watched me stumble after her best friend's affections for years, but never said a word about her twisted love for me. Naive 12 year old's can't differentiate desire from need. Life doesn't work that way, neither does love. It's been 6 long years and she's more beautiful than ever, but does the scrawny, broken 18 year old boy get the girl that ran away into the night? Who ended up with the broken heart? 

Only time will tell because after all...loving her isn't really an option.

  • away
  • best
  • blue
  • carnation
  • flowers
  • friend
  • heartbreak
  • hurt
  • love
  • lovely
  • mistakes
  • pain
  • relationship
  • rose
  • rules
  • run
  • stars
  • sweet
_petrichor _petrichor Jul 02, 2013
@AdrianaPrice Hi! Thank you for your lovely comments! I shall try my best to upload soon! I can't promise anything (I've never been known for fast uploading -_-'') but I'm going to try my best to :) You're comments have really made me smile so thank you! :D
_petrichor _petrichor Jun 11, 2013
@Perez_Y ^_^ And you have an amazing taste in books! :P Haha, thank you for reading~
_petrichor _petrichor Jun 11, 2013
@Raayha28 Thank you so much for the comment! Haha, I'm going to try my best and upload :D 
                              
                              @MissAlice Aw, you are just too sweet! I'm glad you enjoyed reading! xD
MissAlice MissAlice Jun 11, 2013
This is such a lovely story, you are a wonderful writer :)
                              ~Ash
YouHadMeAt_Believe YouHadMeAt_Believe May 20, 2013
Did you make the cover? Because it is... a-mazing. I just have no words to describe it.
                              
                              Is this a short story or is it going to be bigger? It's really heart-touching and beautifully sad...
scorpianio scorpianio May 14, 2013
AMAZING!!!!! But kind of sad... But I still loved it! :) The first chapter got me interested and usually it takes me like... 3 chapters to get me hooked (: So... upload soon!!!!