Beauty and The Beast

Beauty and The Beast

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HisAngel By HisAngel11 Completed

He griped my arm so hard i screamed in pain. It will leave bruises.

"I'd be careful with my words if i were you. You can't say whatever you want in my house, let alone insult me. If you ever do that again you'll be condemned to death."

His deathly words made me realized i can't expected what he would do to me, what he was capable of. I tried to get away from his grip. 

His grim demeanor made me opened my eyes wide. This is the real him. This is James Black. He was the only one i should scared of. This proved what everyone's been telling, the cruelest man alive. Even worse, he was the monster. 

"You will not sleep or eat in this house until you know how to place yourself and have some respect." He said more like an order.

He turned his back and talk with the two guys at the door.

"Take her to the backyard, let her sleep outside." Then walked away.

Will Cassandra Pearce survive from the vicious cold-hearted billionaire James Black ?

  • billionaire
  • completed
  • cruel
  • mafia
  • romance
Think it needs tweeking abit especially on the taster because if it doesn't make sense some people won't bother reading it. Fair play though posting it takes guts, I couldn't do it :) but constructive criticism is always good :)
Kattyfati Kattyfati May 27
Well for a while I thought that ,that person didn't killed her father but a neighbour or someone else but he just did right??.........anyhow I don't know about this grammar much but I can understand this story so far but I hope it goes well cuz I,m trying to learn something from every single story
Kattyfati Kattyfati May 27
Well let me know one thing "English is not ur native language??thats why u r having problem writing it
citygirlsp1412 citygirlsp1412 Jan 28, 2016
Malefic? So rare to come across that word! It's easier to use "wicked", js
Have to work on grammar please , I can't read this any futher cause it gives me a headache
coral1919 coral1919 Feb 12
Please capitalize I that is the biggest crime anyone can make