The Error of Judgement (North and South Fanfic)

The Error of Judgement (North and South Fanfic)

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ikukokoi By ikukokoi Completed

The shock of sudden death of Mr. Hale crushes Mr. Bell, rendering him unable to bring the sad news to Margaret himself. He is forced to delegate the terrible duty to the only one he can entrust it: his friend and tenant Mr. Thornton.

elwren75 elwren75 Jul 19, 2014
Your imagery in this chapter is starkly beautiful. It conveyed the distraught feelings of your characters perfectly! You've definitely kept the angst in play, too. Why can they not see?
elwren75 elwren75 Jul 19, 2014
I love this twist, but poor Mr. Bell. I can't wait to see how this will influence things!
CarlyQ CarlyQ Jul 03, 2013
I love the way he lays his palm on her door, digging up the courage to knock.  How very Thornton!
CarlyQ CarlyQ Jul 03, 2013
Love the first chapter! Poor John in the hot seat, but who better?
SabrinaBrandon SabrinaBrandon May 07, 2013
So, thornton learns the truth about her brother and gets a hint (though he seems blind to it) that Margaret likes him more than he thinks.  Great chapter!
SabrinaBrandon SabrinaBrandon May 07, 2013
I love this twist on one of my favorite classics!  I'm off to chapter 2.