Playing with Fate

Playing with Fate

841 Reads 34 Votes 14 Part Story
Meg-Anne By ThisIsMeggehhh Updated Mar 05, 2012

Me, Lilly Cady: determined, over-ambitious and hard working. Him, Shane O Dowell: cheeky, hot and a bit of a stalker. I know what you're thinking. Stalker? What the hell? Just read and you'll realise the nightmare I've gone through to find my so-called 'Mr. Right'.

  • kiss
  • love
  • student
  • teacher
  • university
ThisIsMeggehhh ThisIsMeggehhh Oct 28, 2011
@MeganRoze Thanks for your advice, it does get alot more descriptive in the next couple of chapter. :) xx
EmTalbut EmTalbut Sep 10, 2011
this is really good, gonna go read the next few chapters now :) any chance you could read my stuff, cause you seem like a really good writer and i could do with some tips! xx
Malfoy Malfoy Sep 02, 2011
I really want to find out who Shane is. I think you should be more descriptive but apart from that, it was a nice chapter. 
                              
                              @MillsJane When I saw your comment, I could not stop laughing!"
Malfoy Malfoy Sep 02, 2011
I like the bit about the tampons! Your spelling and punctuation is good.
heyitsmaggiex heyitsmaggiex Sep 02, 2011
I really liked it, even though some things in this book are not really my thing...
MillsJane MillsJane Sep 02, 2011
Lots of Dialouge, good grammar and spelling rate this chapter 9.5/10