Shattered Line

Shattered Line

23K Reads 2K Votes 53 Part Story
Ashanina By Ashanina Completed

Life and death are separated by a thin line. As a soul passes between them, a blank slate is presented anew. Emotions and experiences once forgotten are rekindled, in a never ending cycle of reincarnation. Exceptions exist to every rule and for Isla that line is blurred beyond distinction. Her memories of life and death remain etched into her very soul. Why is she an exception? Why does she experience death so often? Why is she constantly being pursued? Set upon at every turn Isla must find the answers in order to discover herself.
    
    
    Undergoing Editing.
    Picture for the cover is not mine :)

  • action
  • adventure
  • betrayal
  • death
  • demons
  • fantasy
  • gods
  • life
  • magic
  • reincarnation
  • suspense
  • swords
ffflaw ffflaw Jul 05, 2017
I like your choice in vocabulary and the way you started your story !!
Juliana_Armani Juliana_Armani Apr 30, 2016
Amazing start!You have a unique way of writing and now I'm more and more interested in the story.Great job!
yayathesailor yayathesailor Aug 30, 2016
"As she soaked in each find mark and line that detailed their faces..." What is she doing "as" this is happening, or perhaps you can connect one of the neighboring sentences to it.
Juliana_Armani Juliana_Armani Apr 30, 2016
Great start!It's important to give your readers a heads up and ask for their opinion!
writervid writervid Sep 05, 2016
Heavy description here very well done. You painted a vivid picture in my head.
writervid writervid Sep 05, 2016
Probed might not be the best word here. I'm not sure what might be better, but the word probed doesn't seem to work.
                              
                              I'll think on it and see if I can come up with anything to comment later.