Until Her Heart Stops Beating (Darkest Night Trilogy Book 1)

Until Her Heart Stops Beating (Darkest Night Trilogy Book 1)

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Andrew Cook By AndrewCook Completed

Blake and Kristen were a normal teenage couple discovering true love. However, six weeks into the relationship, Kristen is killed in a hit-and-run accident...

  • death
  • romance
  • supernatural
AndrewCook AndrewCook Aug 31, 2011
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I'll try and separate it out into chapters (I only started yesterday so I didn't know how to lol)
Nonbeliever Nonbeliever Aug 31, 2011
I read up to the end of chapter three and it is so sad! :( but in a good way ^ ^ *voted*
AndrewCook AndrewCook Aug 30, 2011
@My_Poker_Face Thanks, I've got the first chapter of my next one done so far, shall I post that up?
AndrewCook AndrewCook Aug 30, 2011
@leahquality This is only my first one so I didn't know you could do that lol, I'll certainly do it in future anyway
leahquality leahquality Aug 30, 2011
lol I feel the need to complain right now! when I was reading the first part of your story, that stupid ad of Warcraft kept on buzzing in the corner of my eye, it was so distracting lol, My gaze kept on avertong to the movement but I got through it lol sorry for the weird complaint!!!
leahquality leahquality Aug 30, 2011
you write beautifully however maybe you should make a new chapter for each chapter... get what I mean? Dont pile the whole story into one part, rather seperate it. But I can honestly see this going far, and boy do you deserve it :)