Hollow Island

Hollow Island

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surfing_on_sunshine By surfing_on_sunshine Updated Oct 23, 2011

Holly looked off the boat out onto the small island, they were going to stay at it for two whole months! Which she wasnt looking forward to because her older sister and younger brother were going to ruin it like they always did! She looked at the tall plain white hotel. it didnt seem real, she didnt like this place and she wasnt sure why.

She has no idea whats in stall...

surfing_on_sunshine surfing_on_sunshine Aug 31, 2011
haha i actually dont know what it is! but yeah i didnt worry too much about this part, im focusing more on the actual story :) But thankyou HEAPS for the feed back!
susannah susannah Aug 31, 2011
I think this part is very intriguing!  But I'm a little fuzzy--is it a prologue?   Just fix up the grammar a bit and you'd have a great story!