The Elites

The Elites

131 Reads 5 Votes 3 Part Story
Unknown By Shamelesspoet Updated Sep 09, 2011

A village plagued by an enemy that even their most advanced weapons can not defeat has left it and everyone in it defenseless. The father tells them to leave and they have a chance of surviving but a man speaks out about a group known as the Elites. A group of special creatures who can match the enemy and are able to defeat it. The father calls them demons and refuses to allow them into the village, but people begin to follow and trust their christian lives with a group of creatures that have no religion and could very well be working for the Devil himself.

  • death
  • demon
  • different
  • elite
  • fight
  • god
SeanPowell SeanPowell Sep 10, 2011
wow this was so awesome!! I enjoyed every second of it and you should definitely continue! :) VOTED!
writexmusic writexmusic Sep 05, 2011
I think this is beautifully written. you have alot of power and gusto coming through with the characters, which are very well developed. your story is so original, and its very refreshing! The whole concept is brilliant and inventive!