Make love right [COMPLETED]

Make love right [COMPLETED]

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Dine By LoveForYou01 Completed

Choosing between the man who is right for you and the man whom you love but who is no good for you... It's not an easy choice. But in the end love overpowers all.

He looked creepy in that pic, google him and he'll look like a god
wow....... it is definitely something different I could read to. impressive .
very good. the tension, the ache. you have a very nice way of expressing feelings.
AMS1971 AMS1971 Jan 24
Excellent beginning :) Very nice writing style. I could definitely feel Dylan's emotional longing for Taylor.  Great job :)