Be the Change

Be the Change

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Potato By Songless Completed

When's the last time you were free? When's the last time you've crossed your own lines?

  • arfie14
  • jesus
  • last
  • love
  • songless
  • words
- - Apr 10, 2012
Looks like people really like it. I don't think you need to be told by me to please,please,please write and write storys like these but I will anyways.
Songless Songless Oct 17, 2011
@Beautiful_Crazy_You  Yes, I love this quote! I mean, we are who God made us to be, and we all have a purpose in life. I'd rather be the person God made me to be than to alter myself just to meet other people's expectations. :)
LoveHeartKoala LoveHeartKoala Oct 13, 2011
short but extremely powerful luv it!!! :D:D:):):P:P:D:D:):):P:P
Songless Songless Oct 03, 2011
@QueenBarbie  Thank you so much! You ma'am, just made my entire week, month perhaps, to be honest. Compliments are scarce for me in real life, so seriously, thanks. Be who you are and stay awesome! :)
                              --Arfie
Songless Songless Sep 28, 2011
@Zectaueus  Oh my goodness, thank you! :D 
                              Yes, I have other poems in my other collection of poems 'Finding You'. You might not want to read the last half of it, though, if you aren't religious. And of course I'll look at your poems! :)
leannemarie leannemarie Sep 26, 2011
The rhyming and fluidity of the poem is great, but i think the message is a bit cloudy and unclear. Maybe specifying, putting more detail into your poems.