When's the last time you were free? When's the last time you've crossed your own lines?
Looks like people really like it. I don't think you need to be told by me to please,please,please write and write storys like these but I will anyways.
@Beautiful_Crazy_You Yes, I love this quote! I mean, we are who God made us to be, and we all have a purpose in life. I'd rather be the person God made me to be than to alter myself just to meet other people's expectations. :)
short but extremely powerful luv it!!! :D:D:):):P:P:D:D:):):P:P
@QueenBarbie Thank you so much! You ma'am, just made my entire week, month perhaps, to be honest. Compliments are scarce for me in real life, so seriously, thanks. Be who you are and stay awesome! :)
@Zectaueus Oh my goodness, thank you! :D
Yes, I have other poems in my other collection of poems 'Finding You'. You might not want to read the last half of it, though, if you aren't religious. And of course I'll look at your poems! :)
The rhyming and fluidity of the poem is great, but i think the message is a bit cloudy and unclear. Maybe specifying, putting more detail into your poems.