it was just a game till i met you

it was just a game till i met you

980 Reads 42 Votes 6 Part Story
Chellipop44 By Chellipop44 Updated Jun 02, 2012

Lucy had no luck in boys and love and relationship. She has the looks, personality everything but just cant find anyone with a spark.Its her last year at school and shes determand to find the special boy, but what she dont know is that hes been there all along.Theres huge secrets and lies that she needs to find out about,but are her nearest and dearst the ones hiding stuff?With her amazing friends and family will she relize before shes to late?

  • animals
  • comedy
  • drama
  • flirting
  • hospitals
  • humor
  • romance
  • school
  • vilonce
panicinmyheart panicinmyheart Sep 16, 2012
Sorry for checking out your story soooo late. I just got back from holidays and saw your post! Your story is really good apart from some grammatical errors.
ilivemylife ilivemylife Jun 08, 2012
There's some errors but I don't really notice them because I know what you meant to say. I like that for once the girl is the badass! Iver all I love the direction VOTED :)
Chellipop44 Chellipop44 Jun 07, 2012
@Musiq4lyf thankyouuu :D and yeah, its in the process of being edited :)
Musiq4lyf Musiq4lyf Jun 07, 2012
Ah, your main character is pretty cute, ha. I like her. Her tough exterior is enticing to me. You have errors, nothing editing can't fix. Just look back over this. Other than that, this has great potential to be something amazing. :D
genevievee genevievee Jun 05, 2012
Your story has potential but your major errors does put me off. Try to edit the story and it will be great! ^^
ChelciaGordon ChelciaGordon Jun 04, 2012
This was pretty good. There were a few errors but a bit of editing will fix them. Other than that it was a pretty good chapter :)