Somethings Are Better Left Alone..

Somethings Are Better Left Alone..

222 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
Anna Holmes By BananaGrl Completed

When a group of friends come across the house of a
old family, they get more than they bargained
for...

Four friends decided to go on a secret camping trip and find
themselves at the house of Old Man Albert. Deciding to explore,
the friends find out that some things are just better left
alone...

  • creepy
  • house
  • murder
  • old
  • teens
carol007 carol007 Nov 30, 2011
@BananaGrl  :D Its still really good you should like write more horror/spooky :P and maybe make it longer?
BananaGrl BananaGrl Nov 30, 2011
@carol007 Thank you, I was going to make it longer but preferred it shorter
carol007 carol007 Nov 30, 2011
wow i actually got the spooks :P its really gud and i sorta wish it could be longer. But thats me :)
Emfaith Emfaith Oct 07, 2011
Oooh spooky! Haha, very good and I didn't notice much grammatical errors! Well done!