The Loophole

The Loophole

1.9K Reads 171 Votes 7 Part Story
uzmarium By uzmarium Updated Feb 03, 2012

Catherine Peterson- her own existence had betrayingly turned against her. A serial killer is irrevocably after her life- just because of the name that she bears. But when the history steps into the present in disguise of a mystery, it is quite hard to tell who is the killer and who is the victim.......

  • brain
  • care
  • clueless
  • confusion
  • death
  • denial
  • detective
  • diary
  • entry
  • fear
  • gain
  • help
  • hide
  • hope
  • killer
  • lonely
  • lose
  • love
  • memory
  • mind
  • murder
  • paran
  • paranoid
  • police
  • ponder
  • roger
  • run
  • scared
  • suspence
  • suspicion
  • suspicious
  • though
  • traffic
  • trust
  • van
  • victim
  • waiting
ThatAbstractGirl ThatAbstractGirl Oct 06, 2012
Your writing style is really great! I just started reading this and I'm already hooked. I always knew you were good but didn't realize exactly how good you were. Great job. Voted! :D
michelle94 michelle94 Jan 10, 2012
i dont usually read stories like this but you have written a great introduction and have really got me interested so well done
Love4AllHatred4None Love4AllHatred4None Dec 18, 2011
Nice, I like your pic of words. Description is also nice, I can see this unravveling into a good story (: *Voted
Booklover4lyfe Booklover4lyfe Dec 18, 2011
This is really interesting! I've never read a story like this before but I really like it. I will definetly be reading more :)
SanSmercy28 SanSmercy28 Dec 18, 2011
i liked your vocab...!!
                              the plot is unique i must say....
                              keep writing...!! and ps. i didn't find any loopholes...lol i mean any grammar mishaps...kuddos to you for that..!! 
                              Xx
NaTTyKiinz NaTTyKiinz Dec 17, 2011
well that was eery to read, haha hence a thriller :] nicely written, i'm glad you clarified some of the criminology terms :]