3 Deadly Sins

3 Deadly Sins

3K Reads 135 Votes 8 Part Story
Ebony Carrick By Ebc-17 Completed

Everyone has a beginning to their story. sometimes the story starts and the very beginning, when they come into the world. Others start when they find their one true love. But my story begins here, at the end of someone else's story, a death. Death was something that John had never considered... until he was involved in a deadly car accident. Will John rise to face the penalties of his actions? or will he allow someone else to take the fall?

clgavin clgavin Feb 10, 2017
I loved this story, don't get me wrong, but I think this first chapter went by a little fast. I mean first he was 21 hen a paragraph later he was 33 then he was 35. It just went a little to fast and I barely got to connect with the characters before the left the book.
WilmaBurris WilmaBurris Jun 03, 2012
Ok he dies,,,pretty intense ending ,good story ,,keep writing
Ebc-17 Ebc-17 May 20, 2012
@WilmaBurris yes, there is several more chapters, this is only the first one
amunet_rose amunet_rose Nov 29, 2011
i looove this story already. The car crash was devastating! but wow, he blamed it on someone elseee...!!!! :x
                              i have a strange feeling that Shawn is going to get revenge. jlkngewrn re g
                              GREAT writing, very good at giving a vivid picture is the readers mind. all in all, brilliant. simply brilliant.
YourBestNightmare YourBestNightmare Sep 28, 2011
I love this story so much! I've only read chapter one so far but it's so suspenseful and detailed, never dull. Voted and added to my library.
                              Amazing job! (:
Ebc-17 Ebc-17 Aug 29, 2011
@WitchChild @Wild_Fire thanks guys,  means so much :D this story was up but I accidently deleted it, so if you can please help me by voting on the chapters that you think deserve it I would appreciate it so much :D