Just One Touch

Just One Touch

542 Reads 27 Votes 2 Part Story
Sofi By livewritelove Updated Sep 03, 2011

Kristina Night has been kept hidden inside an old church for years, without an explanation. On her sixteenth birthday she’ s given one; she is one of the seven chosen ones. A Nexvis. She is also told she is the reason for the death of her caretaker, with a single touch. At birth, she was given a shot that turned her into a monster, now she has to meet the other six and go out into the world at large. Will they survive, blend in, or will they bring chaos to the world and ultimately be killed? Find out in Just One touch.

  • baby
  • bad
  • cage
  • cloaks
  • dust
  • girl
  • guard
  • hands
  • mom
  • night
  • nurse
  • taken
  • teacher
volleyballxcutie volleyballxcutie Feb 26, 2012
Spacing is kinda funky. It distracted me a bit. Which is sad because it sounded like a good story. Anyway, not bad! Could use some work here and there! Keep writing! :)
ToastedBagels ToastedBagels Sep 26, 2011
The spacings a little weird; I'm not sure if it's on purpose, but a some lines seem double spaced and others are like quadruple.
xSinfullySurrealx xSinfullySurrealx Sep 21, 2011
This is SUCH is a differnet story! So intruguing...!!
                              Awesome! :-)
crazy_vibes_ crazy_vibes_ Aug 31, 2011
I really like this. It's interesting. This seems like it will have potential. Keep writing! <3
Mae-Day Mae-Day Aug 31, 2011
Really cool and interesting! But you need to re-phrase and re-work some sentences. I hope to read more <:
amandarose amandarose Aug 30, 2011
HAHA, you're story has the same title as mine! I'll add this to my library, the description sounds good! :D