Love Poetry

Love Poetry

669 Reads 13 Votes 1 Part Story
Lisa By MrsJungJiHoon Completed

One boy came along into Two girls's life and torn their relationshp by try to date them same time. One is heartbroken now and the other girl is pregnant now because of him.

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orkneyman orkneyman Dec 31, 2014
it's not the falling in love that hurts...no not the falling...it's the sudden stop
                              
                              good story
pinktink13 pinktink13 Feb 28, 2012
i did not mean to insult  you, im sorry, it was just kind of hard for me to read.
gempearl gempearl Nov 21, 2011
this is really good, i just got a bit confused by some of it >.< good job though, much better than anything i could have done.
                              could you please take a look at my stories?^.^ i really need some feedback
blueberryalex blueberryalex Sep 25, 2011
Noooooo! XD really nicely written and i like your style cos it's kept me reading the whole thing even when it was getting a bit...loud, if you know what i mean :D
pruewatkins pruewatkins Sep 14, 2011
what's sad is i have seen this happen to friends so many times its sad very good poem
TheLastKidrauhl TheLastKidrauhl Sep 06, 2011
At first I didn't get it but then I began to love it well done x