BEYOND YOUR EYES

BEYOND YOUR EYES

1.5K Reads 41 Votes 5 Part Story
summer94 By summer94 Updated Oct 24, 2010

“The first thing you should know is that nothing is as it seems, especially you.” 

Avery is just an ordinary girl, or so she thought. When one night she's kidnapped and then rescued by some strange creatures, she finds out that she has been dragged into a whole new different world. One where wizards, shapeshifters, vampires and demons roam the streets. Now she must decide whether to stay and fight along her new friends or return to her world and turn her back on who she really is...

kalimia kalimia Oct 16, 2010
I really like it. You started it out wonderful. Keep up the good work. Look forward to the rest.
LemmeReadVP LemmeReadVP Oct 16, 2010
I friggin love it man so far it's rlly interesting. It is suh a cowincedence tht i started reading the 1st harry potter today lol i guess it was to get me ready 4 this. not tht it's a rip off of harry potter it's just got me int he mood for all tht mystical stuff!
summer94 summer94 Oct 14, 2010
@cutiebuny lol thanks for taking the time to read it. You really think my english is that good? wow, thanks, it's nice to know that all these years studying english have paid off! XD
cutiebuny cutiebuny Oct 14, 2010
hey! i'm reading like you asked and i really like it. i cant beleive english is your second laguage. i cant tell the difference
summer94 summer94 Oct 14, 2010
@frakkevin Thanks!!! you just made my day! =D 
                              
                              I'll be sure to check out your story right about now...
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 14, 2010
Cool start, I hate when authors spend so much time boring us with how the powers work, but I like that your characters were just using powers all willy nilly..also pretty good writing
                              
                              
                              pst, check out my story