Roses For Daisy

Roses For Daisy

230 Reads 12 Votes 2 Part Story
mareeUGH_bonita By mareeUGH_bonita Updated Aug 29, 2011

Daisy Renato has it all. Shes the star of the women's soccer team, has straight A's, and has a wonderful, amazing boyfriend, Adrien Flores. But when something happens to Adrien, Daisy is stuck with a broken heart and an incomplete life. Daisy is forced to move on but something keeps her from moving too far. She is plagued every week with a single white rose. So, what happens when she is forced to choose between the love she has and the love she had.  This backwards love story follows Daisy on her journey through love, lust, and fear.

  • fear
  • love
  • rose
Niya0518 Niya0518 Dec 31, 2014
A quote you can use in here is every rose has a thorn that's why I'm a daisy.(btw this is amazing so far
Cherryflossx Cherryflossx Aug 29, 2011
This is a very good start. it flowed very well but there were some grammar and punctuation mistakes which can be easily fixed there could be a little more description exceptional for Daisy but other than that it was an interesting story and  worth reading on :)
mealle mealle Aug 29, 2011
This is really good. Your writing flows well and is very descriptive, there are a few minor grammar errors but no big deal. Your story has me very interested.
                              
                              Good Job :)
purplecursor purplecursor Aug 29, 2011
Compelling. I must say Im curious to what happens next. Good writing style. A few typos like how you type a little to alittle and used flopped twice(you shouldve used another word similar to this.) Easy on the eyes. All in all I'll give a 8:)
moosechester moosechester Aug 29, 2011
I'm very interested in where you're going with this story. It seems very intriguing... 
                              Also, I love your cover :)
mareeUGH_bonita mareeUGH_bonita Aug 29, 2011
@KaiteRae Thank you very much for your critiquing! I am the worse with punctuation (especially using more than I need to haha.) But thank you and I actually cant wait to finish the next chapter. :)