In the Night

In the Night

277 Reads 6 Votes 1 Part Story
alissende By alissende Completed

Sleeplessness can lead to strange discoveries, as Rose is about to find out.

LifeIzBeautiful LifeIzBeautiful Nov 01, 2012
Nice detailing you have done, and i agree wit @BurntWords the way you have explained the heat....really made me feel the main character's train of thoughts.
alissende alissende Jul 11, 2012
@BurntWords It's alright, I like compliments as well :). Thank you for reading this and taking the time to comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
BurntWords BurntWords Jul 10, 2012
Hey, I'm really loving this so far. Will comment properly when I've read the rest but I just wanted to point out a typo otherwise I'll forget: 'She pushed the curtain open an itch...' Should be 'inch', right?
alissende alissende Jul 09, 2012
@xSavvyx i have a couple ideas for continuing this, but I don't plan to do it just yet. Thank you for reading and commenting!
awkwardqueerkid awkwardqueerkid Sep 29, 2011
i like this. it's really descriptive, and i really wanna read more. update !! :)