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Kiss Of Death

Kiss Of Death

15.6K Reads 286 Votes 17 Part Story
Akanksha By InHemsworthianHeaven Updated Dec 11, 2010

Adrianna always thought she was a nobody. 
Molested, beaten and depressed she lived her own small world as a failure until Ivan came in her life and turned upside down. 
Worse, she was was falling for a man who couldn't be human and their love was forbidden.

supernaturalmom supernaturalmom Nov 16, 2010
I really liked that, it was so exciting.
                              peace out
InHemsworthianHeaven InHemsworthianHeaven Nov 10, 2010
@BlondFangs Thanks!
                              Um. I'm not a paragraph kind of person when it comes to paranormal. But they are there. 
                              Ahead. Somewhere. 
BlondFangs BlondFangs Nov 10, 2010
Great start, depressing but brilliant. I liked the way he disappeared too. On a negative note though where are the paragraphs? 
Musicbreatheslife Musicbreatheslife Oct 19, 2010
Ooooh!! I like how you've expressed her emotions and feelings. They have an edge to it. Umm just one thing.....the mystery he a vampire?! Guess I'm gonna find out!! =)
purplebananas007 purplebananas007 Oct 14, 2010
                              I really like it. I can't wait for you to upload your next chapter
                              hope it's soon!!!!!
InHemsworthianHeaven InHemsworthianHeaven Oct 13, 2010
@liliancarmine Thanks! I'm not very good at paranormal but I'll do my best to keep you hooked ; )