The Night I Died

The Night I Died

428 Reads 14 Votes 3 Part Story
Sachiko Asame By VampirePrincess27 Updated Oct 15, 2010

A story about an eternal love that shatters after a shocking discovery

    misskaydawkins misskaydawkins Nov 09, 2010
    Um... is the first paragraph suposed to be a prolouge? but other then that I think you're off to a good start. It has my interest! The title seems to say that something really big is going to happen! so keep updating I wanna see how things turn out for Lucia. 
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    VampirePrincess27 VampirePrincess27 Oct 15, 2010
    @frakkevin awwwwww ^.^ thank you so much!!! i really appreciate you going over my stories for me :) i really do :) 
                                  and yes he is lol hes one of those that is excommunicated from the vampire community......he is so bad@55 lol
    KAFrak KAFrak Oct 15, 2010
    Is he a vampire?
                                  
                                  I think this chapter is better than the first. The first came off very basic and the formatting was so...sexy. But you did a way better job with this chapter..I honestly mean that
                                  
                                  
                                  pst, check out my story
    VampirePrincess27 VampirePrincess27 Oct 14, 2010
    @frakkevin shes kind of the spaz in class......you'll find out why later.  but the teacher picks on her because of her family history....
                                  
                                  and thank you :) please recommend to others :)