Sacred Geometry 🔥 (Staff Pick)

Sacred Geometry 🔥 (Staff Pick)

374 Reads 38 Votes 4 Part Story
Cliff Jones Jr. By CliffJonesJr Completed

A young student visits the home of a renowned professor who has made the generous offer of tutoring the boy in mathematics. Over an unusual cup of tea, the two begin discussing geometry as planned, but conversation soon turns to the fourth dimension and evolves into a sort of guided meditation. An out-of-body experience gives the boy a terrifying new view of the world. After what he sees, there may be no going back to his old life.

Length: 2,800 words, 11 pages
Honors: October Writing Challenge Staff Pick (2015)
Highest Ranking: #664 in Paranormal (2016.08.16)

  • creepy
  • dimensions
  • dreampunk
  • educational
  • ghost
  • horror
  • meditation
  • oobe
  • outofbody
  • physics
  • scary
  • science
  • sff
  • shortstory
  • slipstream
  • supernatural
  • thinkfiction
  • thinkfictionunder
  • wattpadfright
CliffJonesJr CliffJonesJr Feb 11, 2016
I wrote this before David Bowie's "Blackstar" came out, but the way I interpret his lyrics, Dr. Aaron would be a blackstar. We don't know where she came from in the first place, but it might be safe to assume she was "born the wrong way round".
FromtheBar FromtheBar Nov 18, 2015
Awwww ... a witch who does math is a good witch!  Ought to be!
                              Good story though!
talkingflowers talkingflowers Oct 26, 2015
Hooked from the beginning with the voice and atmosphere. Free tutoring was a big red flag that waved us on into the spooky old house, and the lesson was indeed fascinating...great twist at the end!
Fairytale_Fabler Fairytale_Fabler Oct 22, 2015
I didn't see that coming. I wonder what else that cornfield is hiding. Animals sometimes just "know." 
                              
                              Best of luck with the contest. :)
nazia nazia Oct 22, 2015
well done! kinda wish the challenge was for more than one-part. Would love to see how Prof Aron uses her new bod!
MyCasandra MyCasandra Oct 22, 2015
So, the professor stole Tom's body? What happened to her body? What happened to Tom? Why did she steal it?
                              
                              I loved the descriptions of dimensions. 
                              
                              Is this the end of the story?