My love for you will stay forever...

My love for you will stay forever...

1.5K Reads 48 Votes 3 Part Story
Ira By Soflyapplepie Completed

How can you prove that you really love someone?

Soflyapplepie Soflyapplepie Aug 28, 2011
@revengefulkarma Thank you! :) Yep, I put big spaces so you'll have the feeling that you want to scroll it down for more. :D
vengefulkarma vengefulkarma Aug 28, 2011
A simple and sweet prologue. The spaces were big but that has a certain effect that makes you wanna scroll down  :)
Stargirlx27 Stargirlx27 Aug 28, 2011
prologue is really good!!! but be careful of the paragraph spacing
carata711 carata711 Aug 28, 2011
four your first english story this is very good! I like the way you space it out. It really hooks the reader, and lets them know about the readers thought!
                              Great job!
Soflyapplepie Soflyapplepie Aug 28, 2011
@inosente_kuno Wehh? HAHAHA. Ang galing naman. ^.^V Thanks sa vote pala! :DD :""")
Soflyapplepie Soflyapplepie Aug 28, 2011
@EMSkeelsCaldwell Hi, thanks for correcting me. I'm just you know a bit confused. Thank you so much for understanding! :) And thanks also for appreciating my story. :D