It's Not All It's Cracked Up To Be.

It's Not All It's Cracked Up To Be.

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patdfanatic By patdfanatic Completed

This is a short story based on the role of my Great Great Grandfather during WW1. These events never actually happened as it is a work of fiction, but they are close to the events of WW1 and other wars alike.

  • battlefield
  • war
  • ww1
patdfanatic patdfanatic Sep 01, 2011
@asheartseattle Thankyou :D I take onboard your recomendation, but please take into account that I wrote this 2 or 3 years ago, before I learnt how to write really captivating and amazing stories. :D I do agree that this needs more Imagery or description xx
patdfanatic patdfanatic Aug 31, 2011
@AJBellxoxOnline Yay! Thankyou! I just found this on my computer from a few years ago and decided to upload it! I'm glad people like it :D
HelloLovely HelloLovely Aug 31, 2011
I absolutely LOVED this. It was well writen (and great attention to grammar!), and gave GREAT description! I hope to see more like this from you!
patdfanatic patdfanatic Aug 29, 2011
@ProfessorZazzy786 Yeah! History is my favourite and best subject, But I wrote this a couple of years ago, before I really got interested in war history (we're doing vietnam atm) I'm glad you liked it and THANKYOU SOOOOO MUCH for voting and commenting :D You are definately my best fan ever!
ProfessorZazzy786 ProfessorZazzy786 Aug 29, 2011
Perfectly detailed description :) It paints a really vivid picture for the reader! Do you do history? Because I like the little historic details e.g. Treaty of Versailles 1919, it really adds to the effect :D
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