Why Do You Love Me? (A Diggy Simmons Story) #UrbanStory

Why Do You Love Me? (A Diggy Simmons Story) #UrbanStory

39 Part Story 20.9K Reads 391 Votes
XPurpleRainDropz By XPurpleRainDropz Updated May 25, 2014

17 and pregnant by a thug thats locked up in jail! will Asia go thru pregnancy alone or will Diggy be home in time?

arionce_x arionce_x Jul 10, 2014 03:06AM
It wasn't boring but when yoy write, use punctuation like periods, capitalized letters, commas, etc. Everything is just a run-on and that's not good. The story is interesting, but it could use some editing.
HerbanLegend HerbanLegend Oct 23, 2013 12:01AM
I'm sorry. No disrespect meant. But I can't read this. The whole paragraph is just a huge run-on, there's no periods. This story could use some editing and I'd be happy to oblige, but until then, I can't really give you my opinion on it.
ohkayari ohkayari Apr 21, 2013 06:39PM
NOOO,It wasntt boring.it was funny,amazing,thuggish and flirtable Lol but write more cuz im up to anything u write