Smell a Rat...

Smell a Rat...

236 Reads 7 Votes 6 Part Story
Madeleine By yor2cool Completed

2 boys meet on a cruise and become rat exterminators...

A short story I wrote for school. Comment, vote and promote if you like it!

yor2cool yor2cool Oct 13, 2010
@frakkevin I was having trouble attaching it with a story group to the first part... but now it's sorted and I'm writing the last part.
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 13, 2010
How DO we catch a rat, not TO we
                              
                              The writing in this was very good...honestly..what kind of ship are they on...a boat..spaceship..you might be clear of the location, but me as a reader allowed my imagination to explore. This was good though
                              
                              
                              pst, check out my story.